For the starving children...
For the aching parents...
For the confused bachelor...
For every freind...
For the abandoned...
For the oppressed...
For the sad...
For the depressed...
For the lost...
For the hurt...
For the empty...
For justice unserved...
For all the flawed thougt...
For all evils accepted...
For every misunderstanding...
For every wrong...
For every right...
For everything and everyone we must come together for the Solution. We must come together because of the problem. We must come together because life is the most precious thing we have and fools take this away from us. We must come together and light has to be shone on ourselves so that we aren't the destructive ones. We must advocate,
for good...
because humanity is all we got and tell me one good reason why we shouldn't improve this gift of humanity itself...
Together we're invincible and life is all we have.
For each other...
For life...
For the Sake of Humanity
5 comments:
When a merchant tries to convince you to buy one of his products he does not put emphasis on how buying that product would help him out. His main argument is not that part of his product is going towards some charity, and he does not say that it is for "God". The main argument of any man who is trying to sell a product is how good it is for you, not anyone else you. This same principle I think you are deviating away from. People say they care about kids dying in Africa because it is the nice thing to do. They donate their $5 to charity to show that they have a good character. But when it comes down to it, they really don't care. How do you expect people to buy your argument when your main points are things they do not care about?
I understand the point you are trying to get across, but the average person who reads this will not be moved. In order to influence someones actions and thoughts, you must change their desires, which requires the use of examples that affect them directly. This article does not do that. For instance when a child is failing in school what is often more efficient at solving the problem, a mother telling her child that he won't get into college ten years down the road, or that he will be grounded for a month? The one that is closer, the one that is more relevant. This is what you must adopt to make your post stronger and more convincing.
Wow. I like this. It's got that raw emotion that shows how real it is, and it's that realism that gets a perosn thinking. It's that realism that's helps a person connect. Every single human being on this Earth could read that and at one point or another, nod their head in understanding. At one point they will smile that sad smile that comes with knowing, and that single tear will shine in their eyes, when that stark realization of knowing they aren't the only who thinks that hits them. It's inspirational, clear. No ploys, no metaphors. It is what it is, it's the truth.
It's what we need.
It's what we will do.
For the Sake of Humanity
Just stop the insanity.
(sorry, i like to rhyme hehe.)
Agreed
Guess what? I am now following your blog!
Feel honored
I said Humility is a virtue, not humanity.
Humility=being humble.
Hope that cleared some things up! i probably spelt some stuff wrong and that's why you were confused.
Thanks for deciding to follow my blog!:D
Keep posting
Lots of Love,
RollingStone007
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